Monday, April 15, 2013

Story Break

Do you guys want to read a story? I've been trying to write a two page art critique, but I was struggling for words so I switched over to a story. The story is 29 pages long, and it's super easy to keep on writing for it. This is a ninja story, and as I write it I'm picturing it as a manga. I feel like the more I write, the better it gets, so I almost don't want to let you read the beginning! I guess beginnings do come first, plus it would make more sense if we started from the beginning. So here goes:


  Snow fell softly from the hazy, gray sky and lay around the farm in a heavy white blanket. Thick flakes swirled through the air, but other than that all the world was still. A scream suddenly rang out. “No!” She cried in terror, but the scream was quickly silenced. A shadowy figure staggered out of the barn, and blood dripped upon the new fallen snow. He fell to his knees and coughed up blood. The pure white snow instantly became a pool of crimson all around him. “I'll never tell.” He muttered. “No one will ev--”
But his sentence instantly ended as a tall stranger knifed him in the chest. “Don't be too sure about that.” He whispered in the poor man's ear. He then pulled his knife from the body and it collapsed to the ground. The stranger then quickly disappeared into the dark menacing forest as it swallowed him up. The snow continued to fall and the world was again eerily quiet.



Crouched atop the building, Kynsai surveyed the city below her. She knew this place like the back of her hand, from its rooftops to the maze of alleys and streets, even though she had only been there a year. The city was still sleeping and all was quiet as Kynsai stood up and squinted as she tried to make out the faces of the two figures who were approaching the city gate. She leaped from roof to roof, spinning and flipping as she went, and ended up at one of the gate towers. As she gazed out over the horizon, the two cloaked figures had almost arrived at the entrance. Laying flat on the roof, Kynsai watched as the guards prepared to meet the travelers.
There seemed to be no trouble and the travelers entered the gates of the city. Kynsai turned and watched them walk away, their robes flapping in the breeze. As she watched them go, Kynsai couldn't help the suspicious feeling that rose up inside of her. Grabbing an electrical pole, Kynsai slid down to the ground. As Kynsai walked through the streets, she saw the other orphans who lived, like her, among the alleys. A few made eye contact, but then quickly looked away. Though they never said it, Kynsai knew they were afraid of her, for she was different from the rest. Her hand instinctively rose to make sure her mask covered her face. Her mask began at the middle of her nose, and hid the rest of her face from there, and it was really more of a piece of cloth than a mask.
Even though the orphans were afraid, she was always welcome among them. She was guaranteed protection, able to beat up any unwelcome visitors that came their way. No one dared mess with Kynsai, the Shadow, they called her.
Kynsai was tall and lithe with golden skin and vivid green eyes. Her hair was caramel-colored with the tips of her hair edged in black. Her hair was long and layered, so the black tips fell jaggedly all around. Her dark brows were a striking contrast to her light colored hair, and only intensified the green in her eyes. A white strip of cloth hid the bottom half of her face, and she wore a silver chain around her neck which disappeared under whatever shirt she would wear.
“Kynsai!”
Kynsai turned to see Maji running towards her, so she stopped and waited for her to catch up.
“Thanks for waiting.” Maji panted, coming up alongside her.
Kynsai nodded. “Is everything alright?” She asked.
Maji shrugged. “Oh, yeah.”
Kynsai had to smile. Maji was always like that. She always acted like she had something to tell you when it was really nothing at all.
“Two strangers came into the city today.” Kynsai remarked.
Maji arched an eyebrow. “Did you see them?”
“Mhmm.” Kynsai said with a nod. “I couldn't see their faces well because they were robed in black.
“And you don't think they're just ordinary travelers, am I right?” Maji asked, knowing that Kynsai always seemed to know when something was off.
“I didn't think so.” Kynsai replied, brushing her caramel-colored hair from her face.
Maji tossed her dark ponytail and studied Kynsai with intelligent gray eyes. “Then who were they?”
Kynsai shrugged her slim shoulders. “I'll find out eventually.”
“Maybe they're Saosin.” Maji suggested, referring the the first class ninjas.
“I don't know,” Kynsai said, “could be.”
Maji could tell by the tone of voice that Kynsai wasn't buying it. Maji merely shrugged. “Hmm. Well, I have to go. I'll see you around.” She called over her shoulder as she bounded off.
Kynsai watched her go. Maji was one of the few orphans who tried to talk to her, and even though Kynsai never mentioned it, she was grateful for that.
A sudden shadow passed over Kynsai's face and she instantly looked up, but she saw nothing except for the clear blue sky above. The streets had begun filling up with people as the sun rose higher. Not being much of a crowd person, Kynsai darted into an alley nearby, escaping into the city's maze.

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